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[原创] Running to fall, falling to tears
YY一下, 乱写一气, 因为一点点诀窍都不知道, 感觉很别扭, 所以恳请大家指点一下. 
本身是一个简短美丽,但很伤感的故事, 也描述了现代社会中一群穿梭在都市的灵魂. 不知道有没有表达清楚, 具体就不介绍了.
Downtown’s been crowded,
People come in flocks to celebrate.
I don't know where I'm to escape,
just switching from one world to another in vain.
Your tears in eyes grasp my thought,
What makes you so melancholy?
The lights are gleaming,
People are jubilant to dance.
I hear you crying sorrowfully,
Perhaps somewhere at the discoteque in downtown.
Your crying in grief convulses my heart,
What makes you so grieved?
The shower is coming,
People are drawling to leave.
I am running to fall, falling to tears,
standing up to stumble, stumble again in desperation.
The gloomy rainfog mazes my mind,
Where should I run away?
本来想写歌词的,后来写来写去,走样了.好像做不来歌词了.:snivel:
想配的旋律在脑子里有了, 很有节奏很快速.:chicken:
以后有机会,想拍MTV来表达这个故事, 不过不想用实物和人, 而是用一系列素描或者漫画快速切换来表现人物和场景画面, 镜头高速闪动.:girlshy:
葛葛美眉们指点一些阿.:flyheart:
拍砖的, 请小心轻放,草船借箭嘛, 俺还指望盖楼呢
[ 本帖最后由 吃花生的大灰狼 于 2007-6-18 01:07 编辑 ] |
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发表于 2007-6-16 22:17
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的帖子一定要顶！
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发表于 2007-6-16 22:30
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