Originally posted by henghenghaha at 2005-4-23 09:01 AM:
写的好,喜欢看
Originally posted by Kirk at 2005-4-23 10:09 AM:
写的不错,生活就是这样点点滴滴的。
不过你说你的性格象女孩子,你的妹妹象男孩子!难以理解,你的妹妹比你还象男孩子!那会是什么样子啊?
Originally posted by yj_bobby at 2005-4-23 12:23 PM:
我想有个双胞胎哥哥
Originally posted by chinesehejing at 2005-4-23 11:25:
难度比较大
Originally posted by yj_bobby at 2005-4-23 12:34 PM:
几率问题
Originally posted by chinesehejing at 2005-4-23 11:36:
买个月光宝盒吧!
Originally posted by shishi at 2005-4-23 12:56 PM:
原创??
Originally posted by chinesehejing at 2005-4-23 11:59:
恩,闲得没事儿干了!!犯傻!:P
Originally posted by chinesehejing at 2005-4-23 10:37:
据说我有个弟弟的,被计划生育给计划下去了,我哭啊!!
哼哈和西门
怎么不反抗呢
可以搞游击啊
Originally posted by Kirk at 2005-4-23 15:07:
首先是注意一下错别字!太多了,我就不一一指出。其次是注意一下文笔,不要象叙事的流水帐!
Originally posted by Flea at 2005-4-23 17:33:
是转贴吗
Originally posted by buss at 2005-4-23 05:39 PM:
哥们儿你不明白 这是风格
你熟悉她就知道了
要她注意文笔 那有可能文章就出不来了
hejing的风格是想到就写 立刻动笔 不加任何文笔的雕饰 所以速度在这里 错别字也在这里
Originally posted by chinesehejing at 2005-4-23 22:02:
其实我也很 像 慢慢写。
这是我今天早上 又 的灵感
Originally posted by buss at 2005-4-23 11:05 PM:
又是俩错别字儿~:
Originally posted by bank at 2005-4-24 06:37 PM:
妹妹是个运动白痴。基本上我们玩的什么跳飞机格,豆沙包,猴皮筋儿她都不行。我就灵活上她几百倍了,是个游戏强者。每次分伙的时候,大家都不太愿意和妹妹一伙。通常就把她判给我,这样即便她“下世”了,也有我救 ...
Originally posted by wo at 2005-4-25 20:26:
yes.gif
hejing请继续!
Originally posted by 娇贝儿 at 2005-11-8 12:35 PM:
我很想有个哥哥...
Originally posted by chinesehejing at 2005-4-23 10:37:
据说我有个弟弟的,被计划生育给计划下去了,我哭啊!!
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