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作者: lenda 时间: 2007-12-9 17:28 标题: 昨晚给一mm写了封信,没想到居然回了,大家进来看看有多少语法错误！

已经无语了, 很不通顺, 大家也看看吧...

i,I know you have been suffering greattorture those days. And you know what? I can feel the pain as well.Thelyric is terrific, striking a chord with its reader, although chancesare slim that I listen to music at office during working hours.But donot "give up" as the lyric goes and never!Just put up with it as longas you think it worthwhile! See for yourself how far you can go!AlwaysWonder why boring textbooks and exercises should make you sleepless! Myown experience never fails: one-hour in-bed reading, and I fall down tosleep!Before it ends, you wrote as if a natural writer did and I envyyou ! :) Pray for your sound sleep tonight!

作者: darwin 时间: 2007-12-9 18:00

很口语化，需要上下文理解含义，但是总体来说，并没有那么糟。
个人意见。

作者: sunrisesunset 时间: 2007-12-9 18:13

Trotz der Fehler scheint es, dass sie sehr sympathisch ist....

作者: darwin 时间: 2007-12-9 19:43

好像空格键问题大一些，