Originally posted by Moses at 2005-10-1 12:51 AM:
妖精,你是个实力的偶像派滴...

Originally posted by 历代 at 2005-10-1 12:50 AM:
最后一句改成今夜泪为你流吧

Originally posted by zycoc at 2005-10-1 01:04 AM:
写的好啊，只是不知道处的是什么景，写的有点伤感

Originally posted by zycoc at 2005-10-1 01:11 AM:
秋晚风急急，叶落鸣凄凄；
独行求学路，谁与我依依？

Originally posted by zycoc at 2005-10-1 01:17 AM:
哈哈，你这诗的意境和我前几天一样，等等哈，我抄给你看

惊雷始知入晚秋，清扫积尘当从头，不复去年喜忧梦，入世愿求一亩侯。

Originally posted by 卖火柴的老妖精 at 2005-10-1 01:16 AM:

独行风光好，

听叶落梧桐。

大道多坎坷，

前路可封侯。。。


和你的诗一下，呵呵~~:D

Originally posted by zycoc at 2005-10-1 01:29 AM:


再合你一首，呵呵。

君于人间何所求？或言真情，或言封侯。
恰如渔樵浊酒后，妄言风月，妄言春秋。

Originally posted by katharine1984 at 2005-10-1 01:29 AM:
我是没没,捧场来了.呵呵

Originally posted by zycoc at 2005-10-1 01:30 AM:
诗兴起来了，妖怪，我们对诗吧？

Originally posted by zycoc at 2005-10-1 01:37 AM:
你这个明显是酒令啊，

前程如酒，往事如梦，

俗者嗜酒，伤者追梦。

Originally posted by 卖火柴的老妖精 at 2005-10-1 01:38 AM:


觉得顺口，没有按诗的格式来~~

要对诗吗？

你出题目吧~~

Originally posted by 卖火柴的老妖精 at 2005-10-1 01:56 AM:
神仙难做，天下攸攸我能管几？

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Originally posted by 卖火柴的老妖精 at 2005-10-1 02:07 AM:


那我先给自己对的哈

神仙难做，天下攸攸我能管几？

妖精好当，江湖迢迢独自清高。。。

Originally posted by zycoc at 2005-10-1 02:11 AM:



你怎么可以自己对说~~~~~~~~~~

Originally posted by zycoc at 2005-10-1 02:15 AM:
算了，我困了，睡觉了，想不到好联子下次再对吧。妖怪晚安